Posted by: Susan Fronk

A Way With Words

improving writing skillsMy husband, who is a pretty good writer, once shared with me that most of his life he was told leaders are readers. Since he wanted to become a leader, he read; a lot. As a serial entrepreneur and senior executive in Fortune 500 companies, it certainly appears as if all that reading helped become a better leader. In fact, I believe that the more you read the better writer you will become.

While I am certainly biased because I am a writer, the quality of your writing can have a significant impact on your business either positively or negatively. In fact, writing is one of the most powerful tools a human being can use to accomplish their goals. Most of you have heard the phrase, “The pen is mightier than the sword”. Per Wikipedia, this is a line from “Richelieu: Or The Conspiracy”, by Edward Bulwer-Lytton written in 1839.  Here is an excerpt taken from the second act:

True, This! —
Beneath the rule of men entirely great,
The pen is mightier than the sword. Behold
The arch-enchanters wand! — itself a nothing! —
But taking sorcery from the master-hand
To paralyse the Cæsars, and to strike
The loud earth breathless! — Take away the sword —
States can be saved without it!

The pen deserves enormous credit for the pivotal role it has played in shaping the world as we know it today. Some of the more stunning examples of the transformational power of words include the Constitution of the United States of America, the Bible, the Koran, business classics such as How to Win Friends and Influence People by Dale Carnegie, and other notable works.

By now, everyone is aware of the profound impact the internet has had on the way we do business, learn, purchase products, and communicate with each other. Over the last few years, Social Media platforms such as MySpace, Facebook, LinkedIn, Blogging, and Twitter have facilitated more communication between more people than ever before. And, the main method they are using to communicate is the written word.

Technology has spawned a new language tailor-made for these mediums. Real-time, text-based communications such as Twitter, instant messaging, e-mail, chat rooms, discussion boards and mobile phone text messaging (SMS) require users to economize on words. Today, there are over 1,000 text messaging and chat abbreviations. For example, LOL is short for “laugh out loud”; OMG is short for “oh my God”; RT is short for “Retweet”, BFF is short for “best friends forever” and hundreds of others.

The downside of this mass adoption of internet shorthand is that people are not practicing good English and grammar. And, it does nothing to improve one’s spelling ability. This reminds me of a young student in the South who came home from grade school one day and told his parents that he didn’t think he was learning much because the teacher told him to spell ‘taters with a “p”. The irony is that while this internet shorthand is intended to expedite communications, it can have just the opposite effect on those who are unfamiliar with it.

Other than those who blog and write for a living, many students as well as working people in America lack the ability to write well. This deficiency can get in the way of being hired, promoted and achieving one’s potential.

For small business owners, an inability to write well presents an even bigger problem because there are fewer employees to delegate tasks that require writing skill. Poorly written proposals can result in lost business. Poorly written ads can fail to deliver results. Poorly written customer correspondence can result in misunderstandings and reduced customer satisfaction. Poorly written product instructions can result in increased customer complaints or lost customers. Poorly written contracts and employee handbooks can result in lawsuits.

The growing interest in adding Social Media to marketing plans has reached tidal wave proportions. Consequently, many small business owners are sticking their proverbial toes in the water. So far, however, they seem reluctant to venture into the blogosphere. This is easy to understand. In order to leverage the marketing power of a blog, it requires fresh material to be written and posted frequently. For people who lack the skills, or the time to write well, this can be daunting.

But, for a small business, blogging can be one of their most cost effective marketing strategies. A quote by Ardath Albee, CEO of Marketing Interactions and author of “eMarketing Strategies for the Complex Sale”, in her article on the value of blogging, “A blog is a natural extension to other types of social media and can help you improve the effectiveness of your overall marketing programs (including SEO). The trick is to incorporate your blog as an integral part component of your overall marketing strategy.

In conclusion, business owners who have “a way with words” have a distinct advantage in today’s virtual economy. Words are the currency of online marketing and Social Media. When it comes right down to it, a big part of business success depends on the three Rs; Reading, wRiting, and aRithmetic. Most business owners understand how critical aRithmetic is, but, seem to have forgotten about the other two Rs. My advice to business owners who lack the ability to write well is to read more and find a good editor. Also if you are on Twitter, be sure to follow @Tips4Writers for insightful tips and inspiration.

If you would like to contact Susan Fronk, you can do so through her LinkedIn page or at susan.fronk@bestbizpractices.org.

If you would like to contact me, you can do so by visiting my LinkedIn page or emailing me at mike.clough@bestbizpractices.org.

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Thanks Mike for another great article. YOU have a great ability to write which is exactly why I feature your Blog on mine :)

Thank you Julie. (blushing)

Well said Mike. Also a second set of eyes is always helpful with document review. For small businesses many freelance consultants will review contracts (not for legal content), general correspondence and blogs for a fee. The question is what fee is reasonable for reviewing a blog? How do you find the best freelance consultants to review documents and correspondence?
Thank you,
Eric

Mike,

I can’t echo enough the sentiments expressed in your blog post. As I always say, never underestimate the power of words (either spoken or written) to make or break impressions. The same goes for impeccable grammar and spelling. It all reflects both on a conscious and subconscious level.

If a business owner can’t or doesn’t have the time to write well, he or she should definitely consider hiring a professional copywriter (assuming the budget is there) and, at the least, as you indicated, should hire an editor to proof for grammar and spelling errors.

I think sometimes great emphasis is placed on design at the expense of copy, but it is really great design combined with powerful copy that drives the action desired – whether that’s building more brand awareness, generating leads, driving sales or other action.

Good post.

Rachel

Language has the power to shape consciousness. The problem with many modern forms of communication is that they enforce brevity and limit understanding. This limits all of our freedoms.

Orwell spoke of language as the ultimate form of political control. Language was so impoverished that no unorthodox thought was possible. The language necessary to express or think about rebellion simply did not exist. Today the “short-speak” of SMS and the short attention spans of the internet are well on the way to achieving the same end.

In marketing, clear language is certainly essential. However, the underlying message has to be clear as well. Telecoms companies in particular economize on segmentation, targeting and positioning effort. The resulting muddy messaging is unsurprisingly ineffective.

The next time you hear a marketing guy talk about “leverage” or “paradyme shift” you’ll know that he really has no idea why you would want to buy his stuff! He should do his homework first.

It’s a fact that good writing and skilled copy development is not easy and it’s certainly not a given that comes with seniority. I’d love to see small businesses invest more in the skills required for good writing (training, employing those with the relevant skills) and outsourcing wisely. For marketing copy especially, using a skilled and recommended copywriter is rarely a bad investment.

Glad you raise this – small businesses perhaps underestimate what a total turn-off bad copy is – looks unprofessional, unsophisticated and naive. Good copy does separate the serious players from the…players!

Mike (and Susan),

Thank you for pointing out that there’s more to effective communications today than SEO.

It may also be worth looking at the importance of brevity. This does not mean a poverty of communication, but expending effort to distill and make crystal clear your message. Winston Churchill famously apologised for writing a long letter, saying that he did not have time to write a short one. He would probably have been a great Tweeter.

Margarette Thatcher said that any communication should carry just one point. The audience would not remember more. Maybe two if the audience worked for her (her cabinet).

You are absolutely correct about the importance of effective communication and its impact on businesses, particularly those smaller businesses who are working to attract larger customers and must project professionalism in everything they do. As a communications consultant, I am constantly educating my clients about the importance of well-written “traditional” communication and its tremendous impact on daily business. Thank you for an article that supports my efforts!

Again, I would echo your comments with regard to contracts. Here, much emphasis is often placed upon long-winded ‘technical’ clauses – which neither party can understand and which relate to some obscure point of law. In contrast, most disputes between people relate to something more basic – like whether or not something was included in the price.

Getting everything down on paper – concisely, but in a way which enables both parties to fully understand the boundaries – is critical not only to sanity, but also to maintaining good supplier/customer relationships. Further, it saves time, money, and demonstrates a professional, ‘attention to detail’ approach – which can’t be bad for your branding!

I agree with your point, Robin, about brevity…and I’m thinking in particular here about special reports that some individuals or companies offer on their websites…as I tweeted out recently, it’s much better to have a short report packed with value-added content than a long report packed with meaningless babble.

Don’t make something long just for the sake of making it long…crisp, succinct and on message should always prevail.

Robin, although I generally agree with your point about brevity, as with most things, there may be an exception to the rule: “storytelling.” Most good stories could be shortened (“to make a long story short…”) but in doing so you would fail to paint the picture necessary to make it a good story.

Mike,

You make a good point about the storytelling exception. To “make a short story long…”, in this case, allow me to refer readers to Wikipedia’s definition of of storytelling. Fundamentally, storytelling involves embellishment, which is the opposite of brevity. For more details, visit http://bit.ly/aTsykw

I am all in favour of a good long story as entertainment. However I do find after I have read a really good long story, say War and Peace, that I was not really able to remember the author’s central message. Something like “if you are going to go to war you should do so whole heartedly and not have conventions etc” … but I could not tell you exactly.

A good “persuasive” story should be fairly direct with obvious metaphors. Humour, in my mind, also helps. If it made me laugh, I am more likely to remember it.

Also beware of the Gestalt and Scripting effects. Busy minds seek to pidgeon hole and complete long stories to save effort.

Words are powerful but can also be a trap. Stories are powerful and for hundreds of years were the way we recorded history. Many families and communities still use storytelling. I feel a sadness that the stories of many of my family members now dead are lost.

However, given that reading is decreasing and that many people want us to “get to the point”, there is an interesting tension between good writing, good communication and good listening/comprehension.

And as one last thought – the semantics around words does not always translate to different cultures, experiences or through the medium.

Great post will repost to our FB page! But, hit yr FOLLOW ME on twitter button & it says page not found.
FYI ;)

Thanks for heads up on the TweetMeme button. I have a support ticket into them now. And thanks for taking the time to comment on the article!

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